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<!–One–><!–thing–>this<!–life–><!–has–><!–taught–><!–me–><br>
<!—->is <!–that–>the<!–perfect–><!–body–><!–is–><!–a myth–><br>
<!–and–><!–there–><!–is no–> secret<!–shortcut–><!–to–>:<!–happiness–><br>
<!–and–>nobody<!–knows–><!–ev–><!–er–><!–y–><!–thing–><br>
<!–or–><!–is–><!–always–><!–always–><!–always–><!–right–><br>
<!–or–><!–is–><!–better–><!–than–><!–any of–><!–us–><br>
<!–we–><!–all–><!–have–><!–moments–><!–of–><!–brilliance–><br>
<!–and–>fits<!–of–><!–R–><!–A–><!–G–><!-E–><br>
<!–and–><!–live–><!–B–><!–E–><!–A–><!–utifully–><br>
<!–in–><!–the–><!–world’s–><!–im–><!–perfect–><!–plane–><br>
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Love the way you took literally and ran with it! Nothing like being given an hour to figure out how to “write” a code poem! But you hit it out of the park! I also think breaking R A G E into separate brackets was awesome, and reminded me of some of the reading from hypertext class. Well played!
Basically, you’ll have to moderate my comment as you see fit, because I think this poem is super-clever! (What I mean is, is it good for you that I keep fawning publicly over how f-ing clever you are?!) Way to use this form the way it wants to be used. Thanks for being publicly clever, again and again, so I can keep appreciating your work. You.
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Love it!
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